Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer with a brief topic sentence and one or two supporting details to sound more natural and informative. Use a linking phrase if you add reasons or contrasts. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. However, I remember borrowing my friend’s bike sometimes, which felt exciting and freeing.

제안: Provide a clearer topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting points with linking words (for example, 'for example' or 'because') to make your answer more concrete and coherent. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. For example, many kids ride to school or to the park because biking is inexpensive and fun, and parents also like it because it keeps children active and outdoors.

× Yes, it's really popular among the children because they find it a joy for their daily life.

✓ Yes, they're really popular among children because they are a joy in their daily lives.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb and pronouns referring to it must be plural too (subject-verb agreement). 'It's' is singular and should be 'they're'. 'The children' is okay but 'among children' is more natural for a general statement. 'Find it a joy for their daily life' has number and collocation issues: 'find them a joy in their daily lives' or better 'they are a joy in their daily lives.' Use plural pronouns and plural nouns to match 'bikes' and adjust the preposition collocation to 'a joy in their daily lives.'