Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently, correct verbs and remove repetition. Give a clear topic sentence then one or two supporting details. Use linking words if adding details (for example, 'so' or 'because'). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I didn’t have a motorbike, so I used my bike to go to friends’ houses and to the park. Because I practiced a lot, I became confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.

제안: Make the statement more natural and precise: avoid filler words (uh) and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because', 'for example', or 'especially'. Use varied vocabulary (commute, affordable, convenient).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, they are affordable and convenient for short trips in busy cities, and some communities even have dedicated bike lanes.

× When I was a child I have a bicycle, not a a motorbike, but I left to ride on it.

✓ When I was a child I had a bicycle, not a motorbike, but I liked to ride it.

This sentence mixes past and present tense. The time frame 'When I was a child' requires past tense verbs. 'Have' should be past 'had' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'Left to ride on it' is incorrect — likely intended 'liked to ride it'; 'left' is wrong word choice and not a listed type, but the main grammatical corrections involve tense and word choice. Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past time expressions; replace 'have' with 'had' and use 'liked to ride it' to express habitual action in the past.

× Yes, most of the bikes are very popular in my country because people uh, go to their jobs or any work with bikes.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because people go to work by bike.

Several issues: 'most of the bikes are very popular' is awkward and likely incorrect generalization; use plural noun 'bicycles' to talk generally (Grammar Problem Type ID 1: Singular and plural issue). 'Go to their jobs or any work with bikes' is unidiomatic: 'go to work by bike' is the natural expression; this also fixes article use and word order (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestions: use a general plural noun for habits ('bicycles are popular'), use 'go to work by bike' for commuting, and avoid filler words like 'uh' in formal answers.