Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy tránh lặp từ, dùng câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (thời điểm, mô tả chiếc xe, cảm xúc, hoạt động bạn làm với xe). Sử dụng liên từ để chuyển ý (for example, so, and, because). Cố gắng giữ tối đa 4–5 câu, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bicycle for my seventh birthday. I often rode it around the neighborhood and visited friends after school, which made me feel very proud. It was the first vehicle I owned, so I remember it fondly because it gave me freedom and confidence.

제안: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về ngữ pháp (chủ-động từ số nhiều), loại bỏ tiếng ắp úng và mở rộng bằng ví dụ cụ thể. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, rồi nêu ít nhất một lý do kèm ví dụ, sử dụng liên từ để liên kết ý (for example, because, so). Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students ride to school every day, and older people often cycle short distances around their neighborhood for exercise.

× My parents bought a bicycle for me at a birthday present about five years ago.

✓ My parents bought a bicycle for me as a birthday present about five years ago.

The preposition 'as' is required with 'a birthday present' to indicate purpose; also word order should be 'as a birthday present'. Use past tense 'bought' is correct. Suggestion: say 'bought me a bicycle as a birthday present.'

× I used to eat a lot, to ride around the neighborhood and to visit my friends.

✓ I used to ride around the neighborhood, visit my friends, and play a lot.

The original sentence mixes verbs oddly and 'eat a lot' is unlikely in this context; 'used to' is correct for past habits. Maintain parallel structure without repeated 'to' and list activities that fit context. Suggestion: keep verbs parallel and relevant.

× It was a symbol blue bike, but I felt very proud of it because it was the first vehicle I could.

✓ It was a sky-blue bike, and I felt very proud of it because it was the first vehicle I could ride.

Adjective order and choice were incorrect: 'symbol blue' is wrong; use a compound adjective like 'sky-blue' or 'bright blue'. Also sentence was missing the verb 'ride' at the end. Suggestion: place adjectives before nouns and include the main verb.

× Bicycle is very popular in my country.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country.

Use plural noun with general statements: 'Bicycles are' rather than singular 'Bicycle is'. Also subject-verb agreement requires 'are' for plural. Suggestion: use plural when speaking about things in general.

× Uh students uh, usually use it to go to school and uh, my grandparents is also used to uh ride near neighborhood.

✓ Students usually use them to go to school, and my grandparents also used to ride around the neighborhood.

Multiple issues: 'students' plural should pair with 'use' (correct) but the object should be 'them' (bicycles). 'My grandparents is' is wrong; use plural verb 'are' or past habit 'used to'. Context suggests past habit for grandparents, so 'used to ride' is appropriate. Also 'near neighborhood' should be 'around the neighborhood'. Suggestion: match subjects and verbs, use correct pronouns and prepositions.