Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要用正确的时态和更自然的表达，并提供一两句具体细节来丰富内容。注意用一到两个连接词使句子更连贯。比如把“Of course I have a bike”改为过去时“Of course I did”并说明何时、和谁一起骑车或有什么记忆。避免语法错误和冗余。

예시: Of course I did. I used to ride my bike to school every day with my friends, especially in the summer, and we would race each other on the way home to see who was fastest.

제안: 回答需更具体并用更恰当的词汇表达原因和结果。避免直接翻译式表达（如“social activation”）。可以说明哪些人群骑车、骑车的目的（通勤、锻炼或环保）并使用连接词（for example, because, so）来衔接原因与结果。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially among students and young professionals. Many people cycle for exercise and short commutes, so biking has helped promote a healthier lifestyle and reduced traffic congestion in cities.

× Of course I have a bike.

✓ Of course I had a bike.

原句中考官問的是過去（Did you have... when you were a child?），答句卻使用現在時態 have，時態不一致。應使用過去式 had。建議：根據問題時間（過去）使用相應的時態，把動詞改為過去式。

× When I try it, I always ride a bike to go to school with my friends.

✓ When I tried it, I always rode my bike to go to school with my friends.

句中時間是描述過去經驗（childhood），卻混用了現在時（try, ride）。另外，try it 用法不自然，應用 tried it 表示曾經嘗試；ride a bike 可簡化為 rode my bike 更自然。建議：敘述過去經驗時全部動詞用過去式，並保持代詞一致。

× Yeah, I think so.

✓ Yeah, I think so.

此句為對現在情況的看法，使用現在時 think 正確，無需改動。

× In fact, most young people pay attention to healthy, thus at the same time increase social activation.

✓ In fact, most young people pay attention to their health, and at the same time increase social activity.

原句中 pay attention to healthy 用法錯誤，healthy 是形容詞，應用名詞 health 或者 use an adjective phrase。thus 用法也不太自然，且 increase social activation 中 activation 用法不符合語境，應為 activity 表示社會活動。建議：用 pay attention to their health，並用 and 或 while 連接，將 activation 改為 activity。