Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and pronouns (e.g., “I taught myself” or “no one taught me”). Avoid redundancy and keep to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I still remember learning to ride it, which was difficult because no one taught me; I had to teach myself. In the end, practicing in the park for several evenings helped me gain confidence and balance.

제안: Use accurate grammar and add one specific reason with a linking word. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific supporting details (e.g., who uses bikes, situations when they are used). Remove filler words like “uh.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines. Many people, especially commuters and market vendors, use bicycles instead of cars because they are cheaper and often faster in congested city streets.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I can still remember the first time I learned how to ride a bike and it's a bit difficult for me because I'm no one is teaching me how to ride it but by myself.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I can still remember the first time I learned to ride a bike. It was a bit difficult for me because no one was teaching me; I learned by myself.

ID:5 Past tense issue. The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'I'm no one is teaching me' is ungrammatical and should use past continuous 'no one was teaching me' to match 'learned' and 'was' which describe past events. Also use 'learned to ride' (infinitive) instead of 'learned how to ride' is optional; both are acceptable but 'learned to ride' is more concise. Break the long run-on sentence into two sentences for clarity and change 'but by myself' to 'I learned by myself'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent (past for past events) and avoid run-on sentences by using punctuation or separate sentences.

× Yes, I think bike are very popular in my country which is the Philippines because most of the people there uh, use bike as a transportation rather than a car because it saves time and money.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, the Philippines, because most people there use bikes as transportation rather than cars since they save time and money.

ID:27 Subject-verb agreement errors (and related pluralization). 'bike are' mismatches number: use plural 'bikes are'. Also 'most of the people there uh, use bike' should be 'most people there use bikes' (plural). 'as a transportation' is incorrect; 'as transportation' or 'as a means of transportation' is correct. 'rather than a car' should be 'rather than cars' to match plural subject. Suggestion: ensure nouns and verbs agree in number, use plural consistently when speaking about general populations, and use 'transportation' without the article or use 'a means of transportation'.