Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short and unclear. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details (where, what kind of bike, how often you rode it). Use correct grammar (e.g., "I was the child" is incorrect). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought when I was six, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the time I was seven.

제안: Your response is confusing and not coherent. Answer directly (Yes/No/It depends) and give clear reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, however) and specific details (who uses bikes, for which purposes, in which areas). Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and university towns, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers use bikes to commute, while in rural areas people often prefer motorbikes or cars.

× Yes, I'm thankful I was the child.

✓ Yes, I'm thankful I had one when I was a child.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and structure. Saying 'I was the child' is incorrect in this context; the student intended to say they had a bike during childhood. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type IDs 12 and 26). Use 'I had one' to refer to a bike and place the time phrase 'when I was a child' after the verb. Also 'thankful' is acceptable but 'I'm glad' could be more natural.

× As it is they call it.

✓ Yes, people often call it that in my country.

The original phrase is ungrammatical and unclear. 'As it is they call it' lacks a clear subject-verb relationship and natural word order. Rephrase to 'people often call it that' to convey that a term or name is commonly used. This addresses sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type 26) and pronoun reference.

× People are using political.

✓ People use bicycles for political reasons. Or: People use bicycles for political campaigning.

'People are using political' is grammatically incorrect: 'political' is an adjective and cannot stand alone as the object; the verb tense 'are using' (present continuous) is possible but the object is missing. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type 13 and 26). Clarify the intended meaning by adding a noun phrase like 'for political reasons' or specify the activity ('for political campaigning'). Choose present simple 'use' for habitual actions.

× They're using bicycles. Go.

✓ They use bicycles a lot.

'They're using bicycles. Go.' is awkward and contains an extraneous 'Go.' which doesn't fit the context. Use present simple 'They use bicycles a lot' for habitual behavior. This fixes sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type 26) and improves clarity.