Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add one or two supporting details. Use past tense when talking about childhood, keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride around my neighborhood after school. It had training wheels at first, but I learned to ride without them by the time I was seven.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence, use plural and correct grammar, and give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and long awkward phrases; use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Because they are affordable and convenient, many people use them for short trips and commuting in crowded cities; for example, students and delivery workers often rely on bicycles to save money on fuel.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'have' conflicts with the time reference. To improve, match the verb tense to the time phrase: use 'had' for past situations.

× Yes, some bike is a very popular in our country because we are going to anywhere freely, smoothly and without any charges and tax, petrol everything.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because people can travel anywhere freely and smoothly without paying charges or taxes for petrol.

Multiple issues match the allowed list; primary is singular/plural: 'some bike is' is incorrect for general statement—use plural 'bikes are'. Also article use: 'a very popular' is wrong without a noun; remove 'a'. The sentence also contains preposition and word choice errors: 'going to anywhere' should be 'travel/ go anywhere', and 'without any charges and tax, petrol everything' should be 'without paying charges or taxes for petrol' or similar. To improve, state general facts with plural nouns and correct verb forms: 'Bikes are very popular because people can travel anywhere freely and smoothly without paying petrol charges or taxes.'