Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student did not answer the question. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (memory, who used it, or how often you rode). Keep to under five sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my older brother’s bicycle to ride around the neighborhood, especially on weekends. Because I lived near a park, I used to go there with friends almost every Saturday.

제안: The answer addresses the question but needs clearer structure, grammar, and more specific details. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting points (statistics, reasons, examples of bike types or common uses). Use linking words (for example, furthermore, because) and correct grammar (e.g., 'children' not 'children's', 'commute' without extra preposition). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in India. For example, many adults commute to work on scooters or motorcycles because they are affordable and convenient in heavy traffic. Furthermore, young people often buy sport or “super” bikes for leisure and status, while ordinary motorcycles are common for daily errands.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country India.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in our country, India.

The word 'bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' is more formal; the main issue is punctuation and clarity: a comma is needed before 'India' when it specifies the country. This fixes a slight phrasing problem and improves grammatical correctness. Suggestion: add a comma before country names used as an appositive and prefer consistent vocabulary (bikes or bicycles).

× Not only children's but even adult people also buy different types of bikes.

✓ Not only children but also adults buy different types of bicycles.

'Children's' is a possessive form but the sentence needs the plural noun 'children'. 'Adult people' is awkward; 'adults' is the correct noun form. The position of 'also' is unnecessary when using 'not only... but also.' Suggestion: use parallel structures after 'not only... but also' and use correct noun forms (children, adults).

× There are super bikes, there are normal bikes which they use to go to their to commute to their work or they used to ride.

✓ There are superbikes and regular bicycles, which people use to commute to work or to ride for leisure.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive: 'there are' repeated, 'super bikes' should be one word 'superbikes' or 'high-performance bikes', and 'normal bikes' is better as 'regular bicycles.' 'Which they use to go to their to commute to their work' contains redundancy and incorrect prepositions; 'commute to work' is the correct phrase. 'Or they used to ride' mixes tenses and is unnecessary. Suggestions: avoid repeating 'there are,' combine items with 'and,' use correct noun compounds (superbikes), use 'commute to work' for travelling to a job, and keep verb tenses consistent.