Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且准确，但过于简短，缺少细节和连接词。建议在回答时先用主题句直接回应，然后补充1-2个具体细节（例如原因、感受或替代交通方式），并使用简单的连接词使句子更连贯。控制在最多5句内。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived far from shops. I wished I had one because riding seemed fun and convenient.

제안: 表达观点明确但语言不够自然，语法和词汇使用有误。建议先给出清晰的主题句，然后用连接词（for example, however, because）补充具体原因或例子，使用正确的词语搭配（e.g. "bikes are popular for exercise", "electric bikes"）。保持句子简洁并避免重复。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for exercise and short trips. However, in recent years more people have started using electric bikes because they are faster and easier to ride on hilly roads.

× Yes, but maybe bike is popular in exercise.

✓ Yes, but bikes are popular for exercise.

句中“bike”应为复数形式“bikes”，因为说的是一般性的复数习惯或趋势；另外介词搭配应为“popular for exercise”更自然。建议将名词用复数表示一般性事物，并使用正确介词搭配。

× More people like ride E bike.

✓ More people like riding e-bikes.

动词“like”后面应接动名词或不定式（在此情境更自然用动名词），“ride”应改为“riding”。同时“E bike”需连写并复数化为“e-bikes”。建议在“like”后使用动名词形式并注意名词复数及词形规范。