Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short, grammatically incorrect (tense mismatch) and lacks detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, correct the verb form, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (who it belonged to, how you used it, a memory). Use linking words like “and” or “because” to connect ideas. Keep responses natural and within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did — I had an old bicycle when I was a child. It belonged to my older brother, and I used it to go to school and visit friends every day, which made me feel independent. Because it was quite worn, I had to repair the chain often, but I still loved riding it.

제안: This reply is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat), then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however.” Aim for 2–3 sentences that explain who uses bikes and in what situations.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and commuting in cities. For example, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic, although car use is more common in rural areas.

× Yes I do, but it's old.

✓ Yes, I did, but it was old.

Grammar problem type ID:6 Present tense issue. The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Do' (present) is incorrect; use 'did'. 'It's' (it is) refers to present; to match the timeframe say 'it was old'. Also add a comma after 'Yes' and include appropriate punctuation. Suggestion: match verb tenses to the time reference in the question (use past tense for past situations).

× You can maybe.

✓ Maybe they are, or maybe not.

Grammar problem type ID:26 Sentence structure errors. The original reply 'You can maybe.' is ungrammatical and mixes the second-person 'you' with a modal 'can' without a clear verb. The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' so the student should give an opinion about bikes in general (third person plural). A correct brief answer would be 'Maybe they are' or 'Maybe not' or 'I think they are.' Suggestion: use a clear subject and verb that match the question (e.g., 'They are', 'I think they are', or 'Maybe not').