Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on grammar, clarity and concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question (e.g. Yes/No). Use correct past tense forms and keep to 2–3 supporting sentences. Include one or two specific details (where you rode, how often) and use linking words like "but" or "so" if needed. For example, correct verb forms: "When I was a child, I didn't have a bike" or "I had a bike and I used it to go to school."

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I sometimes borrowed a neighbor’s bike to ride around the park on weekends.

제안: Organize your response: give a direct opinion first, then 2–3 supporting details with clear linking words. Use accurate vocabulary ("popular", "common", "half of the population", "expensive to maintain"), correct grammar, and avoid confused fragments. Explain reasons or give an example. Keep sentences short and coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people—perhaps around half the population—use them for daily travel because they are convenient and cheap. However, motorcycles can be expensive to maintain due to fuel and repair costs, so some people still prefer public transport.

× When I were a child I don't have a bike I used to have before to the school and to any places.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike. I used to walk to school and to other places.

Multiple tense and subject-number errors: 'were' should be 'was' for first person singular in past (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). 'don't have' is present tense and incorrect; use past 'didn't have' to match 'When I was a child'. The phrase 'used to have before to the school and to any places' is ungrammatical: 'used to walk to school and to other places' conveys the intended habitual past action. Suggestion: ensure past tense consistency when talking about childhood and use natural collocations like 'walk to school' or 'go to other places.'

× Definitely be ex bikes where bikes are popular in my country people we cannot say like all people have a bike but like half of the population has bikes to travel.

✓ Definitely, bikes are popular in my country. We cannot say that all people have a bike, but about half of the population has bikes for travel.

The original sentence has several structure and word-order problems (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'Definitely be ex bikes where' is meaningless; rephrase to 'Definitely, bikes are popular.' 'people we cannot say like' should be 'We cannot say that all people have a bike.' Use 'about half of the population' for approximations and 'for travel' instead of 'to travel.' Suggestion: break long ideas into clear shorter sentences and use connectors like 'but' with proper clause order.

× But it consists of lots of fuel and lots of money for that.

✓ But they require a lot of fuel and cost a lot of money.

Pronoun and agreement error: 'it consists of lots of fuel and lots of money for that' is incorrect (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). 'Bikes' is plural, so use 'they' not 'it.' 'Consists of' is wrong collocation; use 'require' for fuel and 'cost' for money. Also use 'a lot of' rather than 'lots of' for a more natural register. Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun and choose verbs that fit the meaning ('require fuel', 'cost money').

× So if I would get a choice.

✓ So if I had a choice,

Conditional clause error: 'if I would get a choice' is incorrect in a simple conditional (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). In the if-clause use past tense 'if I had a choice' (or 'If I were given a choice') and not 'would.' Suggestion: use 'if' + past simple for unreal present conditions and 'would' in the main clause: e.g., 'If I had a choice, I would...'.