Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, which is good. To improve, make the response slightly more natural and fluent by removing repetition and adding one supporting detail (where or how you used it). Keep it brief (1–2 sentences) and use a linking word if you add a second idea.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that I used to ride around my neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: The content addresses the question but the answer has grammatical errors, repetition and unclear phrasing. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., 'however', 'now', 'mostly'). Use correct verb forms and concise vocabulary.

예시: Not really — bikes weren't commonly used as transport in my country because public transport and cars were more convenient. However, nowadays more people ride bikes for exercise and leisure in parks.

× No, it wasn't a popular in my country to write a bike as a transport, but right now it's riding bike. It's more it's entertainment for entertainment like riding in the park, not for transport.

✓ No, it wasn't popular in my country to use a bike for transport, but right now people ride bikes. It's more for entertainment, like riding in the park, not for transport.

Multiple grammar issues fit the 'Verb in the present participle form' category because the student used incorrect verb forms and word choices where base verbs or appropriate verb phrases are required. Specific problems: 'wasn't a popular' uses an unnecessary article and adjective form — use 'wasn't popular.' 'to write a bike as a transport' is incorrect verb choice and structure; use 'to use a bike for transport.' 'it's riding bike' incorrectly uses -ing form and missing plural/auxiliary; correct to 'people ride bikes' or 'people are riding bikes.' 'It's more it's entertainment for entertainment' is redundant and awkward; simplify to 'It's more for entertainment.' Suggestions: replace incorrect -ing or wrong verbs with correct base verbs or noun phrases (use, ride), remove unnecessary articles, make 'bike' plural when speaking generally (bikes), and avoid repetition. These corrections keep the tense consistent with the examiner's question about past and present habits and improve grammatical accuracy.