Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response did not answer the examiner's question and instead repeated a similar-sounding word, which breaks coherence and fails to provide content. Improve by answering directly with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and to go to a nearby park. Because my family lived in a quiet neighborhood, riding felt safe and helped me build confidence and independence.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is short and has a grammatical error (“bike is” should be “bikes are”). Improve by making a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “however”) to make your answer more informative and cohesive. Use varied vocabulary like “widespread,” “common,” or “cycling culture.”

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in the Philippines. For example, because cities are crowded and public transport is often more convenient, many people prefer jeepneys or buses over cycling. However, cycling is becoming more common in some areas due to bike lanes and health awareness campaigns.

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student answered the Examiner's question incorrectly by repeating a different noun and using a question form. This is a sentence structure error because the response should be a direct answer in past tense. Use 'had' (past tense of 'have') and state the correct noun 'bike'. Suggestion: Answer questions with a clear declarative sentence matching the tense of the question (past), e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× I live in the Philippines and I think bike is not that popular here.

✓ I live in the Philippines and I think bikes are not that popular here.

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when speaking generally about the popularity of bicycles in the country. Also use plural verb agreement 'are' for 'bikes'. Suggestion: Use the plural form when referring to items in general (bikes are), or use an article with singular countable nouns (a bike is). For example, 'I think bikes are not that popular here.'