Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically consistent, use a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details, correct tense consistency, and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, start with a concise statement about having a bike, then add details (age, appearance) and a brief note about what you did with it. Use linking words like “and” or “so” to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes — I had a bike from about age five. It was pink and had training wheels, so I felt confident riding it around our neighborhood. I especially remember learning to balance on small hills and racing my friends after school.

제안: Clarify unclear words, use accurate vocabulary, and provide a topic sentence followed by specific reasons and at least one linking word. Correct the phrase “Vik's happy” to the intended idea (e.g., “bikes are popular”) and give concrete examples (commuting, bike lanes) to support your opinion. Keep responses concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and students often cycle to school, which saves money on fuel and reduces traffic congestion.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was around 5. It had training wheels and was pink and I love to ride the bike around the neighborhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was around 5. It had training wheels and was pink, and I loved to ride the bike around the neighborhood.

The sentence mixes past tense ('had', 'was') with present tense ('love'). Maintain consistent past tense for actions that occurred in childhood. Change 'love' to 'loved' to match past time reference. Suggestion: Keep all verbs referring to past experiences in the past tense.

× Yes, I believe Vik's happy in my country due to environmental reasons and it helps to cut the cost of fuel.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are popular in my country due to environmental reasons, and they help to reduce the cost of fuel.

The original uses 'Vik's' which is likely a typo or wrong pronoun; also 'it' is singular while referring to bikes (plural). Replace with 'bikes' and use plural pronoun 'they'. Additionally, 'cut the cost of fuel' is better phrased as 'reduce the cost of fuel'. Ensure subject and pronoun agree in number and correct the typo.