Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and simplify your response, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and stay within 3–4 sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., 'every morning', 'it was great fun', 'gave me many happy memories').

예시: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bicycle every morning with my father, and we would cycle around our neighborhood. It was great fun and gave me many happy childhood memories.

제안: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. Say whether bikes are popular, then give 2 specific reasons with clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'very hot', 'roads are rough/unsafe', 'heavy traffic'). Avoid incorrect verb forms like 'I didn't' for general statements.

예시: Not really. In Thailand bicycles are less popular because the weather is very hot and many roads are rough or unsafe for cycling, so most people prefer motorbikes or cars.

× I rode a bicycle everyday morning with my father and we would cycle around our neighborhood is what queer is, is what a great fun and give me many happy memories of my childhood.

✓ I rode a bicycle every morning with my father, and we would cycle around our neighborhood; it was great fun and gave me many happy memories of my childhood.

Errors: incorrect adverb spelling 'everyday' used instead of 'every morning', awkward and fragmented clause 'is what queer is, is what a great fun', incorrect verb tense agreement 'give' should be past 'gave'. This sentence describes past habitual actions, so past tense verbs are required. Suggestions: use 'every morning' (phrase indicating frequency), remove unclear phrase 'is what queer is', join clauses with commas or semicolons, and use past tense 'gave' to match 'rode' and 'would cycle'. Use 'great fun' without article 'a'.

× No, I didn't because in Thailand is very hot and the road is roughly.

✓ No, I don't think so because in Thailand it is very hot and the roads are rough.

Errors: tense mismatch—question asks about general present habit so use present tense 'don't think' not past 'didn't'. Missing subject 'it' before 'is'. 'Road' should be plural 'roads' when speaking generally, and adjective 'roughly' (an adverb) is incorrectly used instead of adjective 'rough'. Suggestions: use present simple for general statements, include subject 'it' in 'it is', use plural 'roads' for general conditions, and use adjective 'rough' to describe roads.