Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ركز على الإجابة المباشرة أولاً ثم قدم تفاصيل قصيرة ومنظمة. تجنب الأخطاء النحوية في الأزمنة وأحرف الجر، واستبدل العبارات المبعثرة بجمل واضحة ومترابطة. على سبيل المثال: ابدأ بجملة قصيرة مثل "No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child." ثم أضف جملة توضيحية مرتبطة باستخدام أدوات ربط مناسبة مثل "However" أو "But", واذكر تفاصيل محددة بزمن مناسب: "My friend had a blue bike which he bought in 2015, but he rarely used it."

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, my friend had a blue bike that he bought in 2015. He hardly used it because he preferred walking to school. It was small and more suitable for short rides.

제안: أجب مباشرة ثم قدّم تفاصيل محددة ومنظمة مع أدوات ربط مناسبة. تجنّب التكرار والأخطاء في المفردات والتراكيب (مثل "the the" أو كلمات غير واضحة). قدّم تقديرًا أو مقارنة واضحة: كم نسبة الناس تقريبًا ولماذا يفضلون وسائل أخرى. استخدم كلمات مثل "although", "because", و"for example" لربط الأفكار.

예시: Yes, bikes are somewhat popular, but they are not the main mode of transport. Although around 20–25% of people use bicycles for short trips, most people prefer scooters or cars because they are faster and more comfortable. For example, in my city many commuters choose scooters to avoid traffic.

× By the way, no but my friend do have had one.

✓ No, but my friend had one.

The sentence uses incorrect auxiliary verbs and pronouns. Use 'No' to answer the question, and 'my friend had one' is the simple past form. Remove extra auxiliaries 'do have had'. Use: 'No, but my friend had one.' Suggestion: Use simple past for possession in the past: subject + past verb (my friend had).

× He is he his bike is blue 1.

✓ His bike is blue.

The phrase 'He is he his' is redundant and incorrect. Use the possessive pronoun 'his' followed by the noun: 'His bike is blue.' Suggestion: Use one pronoun form and avoid repetition: 'His bike...'. Replace extra words with concise structure.

× He bought it since 2015.

✓ He bought it in 2015.

Use 'in' with a year to indicate when an action happened in the past. 'Since' requires a continuing action to present and pairs with present perfect (e.g., 'has owned it since 2015'). Here the simple past 'bought' needs 'in 2015'. Suggestion: Use 'in 2015' with past simple, or 'has had it since 2015' with present perfect.

× He is actually not using it more than.

✓ He is actually not using it much anymore.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and wrong choice of words. 'Not using it more than' is ungrammatical. Use 'not using it much anymore' to express reduced current use. Alternatively, for past habit: 'He didn't use it much.' Suggestion: Use 'not ... much anymore' for decreased present usage.

× Specifically yes, but not more than the quarter is used the the bikes all the all, not the whole or overall Lagrab used the the scooter or car.

✓ Yes, but bikes are used by less than a quarter of people; many use scooters or cars instead.

The original sentence has incorrect tense usage, word order, and many redundant words. Use present simple passive 'are used' to describe general facts. Clarify meaning: 'less than a quarter of people' and 'many use scooters or cars instead.' Suggestion: Keep sentences clear and concise: subject + verb + object, and avoid repeating words.