Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with past tense and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid short fragments and repetition. For example, use "I had a bike" not "I have a bike when I was a child," and explain where or how often you rode it.

예시: I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. Because my house was close to a small park, I often practiced riding there with my friends, which helped me become more confident on busy streets.

제안: Make your response more natural and precise. Begin with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and use linking words (for example, "because," "for instance","so"). Avoid vague phrases like "everything" and correct grammar (use plural 'bikes' and 'important to'). Provide one or two concrete examples of how bikes are used.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient form of transport. For instance, many people cycle to work or school, and in cities short trips are often faster by bike than by car, so cycling is part of daily life for many families.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time marker 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'had' to agree with the past time reference: 'I had a bike.' Keep tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I like to ride with it.

✓ I liked to ride it when I was young. OR I used to like riding it.

The original is awkward: 'ride with it' is incorrect collocation for using a bike. Also tense should match past context. Use 'ride it' or the gerund 'riding' with 'used to' or past 'liked.' Suggested corrections: 'I liked to ride it when I was young' or 'I used to like riding it.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, the bike is very popular in my country because bike is very important of my country.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because bikes are very important to people here.

Article and number errors: 'the bike' and then 'bike' are incorrect. Use plural 'bicycles' or 'bikes' to speak generally. Also 'important of my country' is wrong preposition and structure; use 'important to people here' or 'important in my country.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× But it was a transportation for work, for school and everything and that's all.

✓ They were used for transportation to work, to school, and for many other purposes.

Subject and number mismatch: if referring to bikes, use 'they' and plural verb 'were.' 'Transportation' is a mass noun; say 'used for transportation' or 'used to get to work and school.' 'That's all' is vague and unnecessary; better specify 'and for many other purposes.' Also adjust tense consistently to past or present as needed. Grammar problem type ID:5