Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, add a brief detail using a linking word. Correct tense and word order: say "when I was a child" and avoid redundant adjectives. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small pink bicycle, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Use more neutral, polite language and provide a reason with a linking word. Avoid negative generalizations like "lazy." Give a specific reason and an example to support your view, in 1–3 sentences.

예시: Not really. Most people prefer cars because public transport is limited and distances between places are large, so cycling is less practical for daily commuting.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child that was a pink little bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; it was a small pink bicycle.

Missing the article 'a' before 'child' and awkward adjective order and clause structure. 'a child' is required (Incorrect use of article and sentence structure). Also 'pink little' is unnatural adjective order in English; the normal order is 'small pink' or 'little pink'. The relative clause 'that was...' is better as a separate clause 'it was...' for clarity. Suggestion: include the article 'a' with 'child', use natural adjective order (size before color), and split into two clauses or use a comma and conjunction for clearer structure.

× I don't think so. Our people are so lazy, so they're mostly using cars.

✓ I don't think so. People in our country are quite lazy, so they mostly use cars.

The original 'they're mostly using cars' uses a progressive form that is unnatural here; simple present 'use' is correct for habitual actions (third person plural agreement with simple present). Also 'Our people' is unnatural in English; 'People in our country' is preferred. Suggestion: use simple present 'use' for habitual actions and rephrase 'our people' to 'people in our country' for naturalness.