Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and naturally. Give a short topic sentence saying whether you did, then add one or two brief supporting details (where you rode it, who taught you, or a memory). Use linking words like "and" or "so" for coherence. Keep it under 5 sentences and use correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. I used to ride with my older brother every weekend, so it became my favorite pastime.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct grammar and linking words such as "because", "for example", or "so" to connect ideas. Choose precise vocabulary (e.g. "popular", "many people", "cycling culture"). Keep responses concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, cities have bike lanes and weekend cycling clubs, so cycling is both practical and a common leisure activity.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error: a short answer is required. Use the auxiliary verb did plus subject and base verb: 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't.' Provide a complete answer rather than repeating the question.

× Yes, because here in my country is know how to bike and cycling.

✓ Yes, because many people here know how to ride a bike and enjoy cycling.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order ('here in my country is know'), wrong verb forms ('is know'), and awkward noun usage ('bike and cycling'). This fits sentence structure errors (and subject-verb agreement). Correct by using a clear subject 'many people', correct verb 'know how to ride a bike', and parallel structure 'and enjoy cycling'. Suggestions: identify the subject, use the correct verb form for the subject, and keep parallel verbs or noun phrases when listing activities.