Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more accurate with tense and word forms, remove hesitations, and give a concise topic sentence followed by one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Aim for 2–3 clear sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I had several bikes when I was a child. My father loved cycling, so he bought different types of bikes for me and my sisters to ride together on weekends.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then give one clear reason using a linking word and a specific example. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Keep it to two sentences max.

예시: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular. For example, most people prefer cars because cities are designed for driving rather than cycling.

× Yes, umm, I have a lot of different bikes and because my dad loves cycling with us, with my sisters, uh, and that's why he buy different type of bikes to cycle with us.

✓ Yes, umm, I had a lot of different bikes because my dad loved cycling with us, with my sisters, uh, and that's why he bought different types of bikes to cycle with us.

Issues: past tense and subject-verb agreement. The question asks about having a bike when you were a child, so verbs should be in the past tense (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). Use 'had' instead of 'have' and 'loved' instead of 'loves'. Also the verb 'buy' must agree with past tense and third-person singular in past: 'bought' (Grammar Problem Type ID 2 and 5). 'Different type of bikes' is incorrect quantifier/number agreement; use 'different types of bikes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1/14). Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense when describing past situations and match plural forms for countable nouns when referring to multiple kinds.

× No, I don't think so. Because our country is like a a car car country, not a cycling country or bicycle country. Yeah, that's why.

✓ No, I don't think so because our country is more of a car country, not a cycling country. Yeah, that's why.

Issues: unnecessary word repetition and article/word choice. Remove repeated words 'a a' and 'car car'. Use 'more of a car country' to express preference; avoid repeating 'country' expressions 'cycling country or bicycle country' which is redundant (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors and ID 22: Article errors/word choice). Suggestion: eliminate duplicate words and choose a single clear phrase such as 'car country' or 'not a cycling country' to make the sentence natural.