Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller, more natural response by adding a brief topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking word to connect ideas and avoid one-word answers. Mention what kind of bike, how often you used it, or a short memory to make it vivid.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every afternoon around my neighborhood. Because I practiced a lot with my older cousin, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the time I was six.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific reasons or comparisons using linking words to justify your view. Include concrete examples or short statistics if possible to strengthen your point.

예시: Not really — motorcycles are much more common in my country. For example, many people prefer motorcycles because they are cheaper to buy and easier to park in crowded cities, so bicycles are mostly used by children or for leisure on weekends.

× Not really, the most popular vehicle here in my country is motorcycle.

✓ Not really, the most popular vehicle here in my country is the motorcycle.

The sentence needs the definite article 'the' before 'motorcycle' because it refers to a specific class/thing known in context (the most popular vehicle). Use 'the' with singular countable nouns when identifying a specific item or class in this way. Suggestion: add 'the' before singular common nouns used as examples of a general category (e.g., 'the car', 'the bus').