Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammar and make the response natural and concise. Start with a topic sentence in past tense, then add one short supporting detail. Use linking words if needed. For example, say whether you had a bike, how often you used it, and why or why not. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived in a busy area and my parents preferred it for safety reasons.

제안: Make the answer fluent and specific. Start with a clear opinion, then give a concrete reason with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler words like “umm” and be specific about who uses bikes and for what purpose. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children and students use them to commute to school because they are cheap and convenient, especially in smaller towns with less traffic.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original mixes present simple ('don't have') with a past time expression ('when I was a child'). Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past tense for verbs when referring to past time frames (e.g., 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.'). (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Yes, I think so because some of umm children's are using this going to writing this, going to their school so that it that's.

✓ Yes, I think so because some children use them to go to school.

The original sentence has broken structure, unnecessary filler words, incorrect possessive form 'children's', and awkward verb phrases ('are using this going to writing this'). Correct version uses a clear subject 'some children', correct plural noun without possessive, and simple present 'use' to state a general fact. Suggestion: remove fillers (umm), avoid incorrect possessives for plural nouns, and use a concise clause (subject + verb + object) to express general habits or facts. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)