Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your answer direct and concise, start with a clear topic sentence, and avoid minor grammar errors. You should use one or two linking words to connect reasons and give a brief specific detail or example. Also correct small mistakes (e.g., "instead of bike" → "instead of a bike") and avoid repeating ideas.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was too young and my parents thought riding would be dangerous, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. For example, I walked about 15 minutes to school every day until I was ten.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary errors, and use linking words for clarity. Replace incorrect words ("spikes" → "bikes") and fix grammar ("which make" → "which makes"; "more convenience" → "more convenient"). Add a specific detail or short example about where or when people use bikes.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In many cities, students and office workers cycle to commute short distances because bikes are inexpensive and easy to park, which makes daily life more convenient. For instance, many people ride bikes to the nearest metro station every morning.

× Yes, spikes are very popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.

The student wrote 'spikes' which is likely a typographical or word choice error; the intended noun is 'bikes' (plural). This is a singular/plural and word-choice error because 'spikes' does not fit context. Replace with the correct plural noun 'bikes' to match meaning and agreement. Suggestion: proofread for incorrect words that look similar and ensure the noun matches the context of cycling.

× I preferred walking or using public transport instead of bike.

✓ I preferred walking or using public transport instead of a bike.

The phrase 'instead of bike' is missing an article before the countable singular noun 'bike'. This is an article/ noun form issue; using the singular countable noun requires 'a' (or use plural 'bikes'). Suggestion: use 'a bike' for singular or 'bikes' for plural: 'instead of a bike' or 'instead of bikes'.

× Many people, especially students and office workers, use them to commute short distances because they are cheap and easy to park, which make daily life more convenience.

✓ Many people, especially students and office workers, use them to commute short distances because they are cheap and easy to park, which makes daily life more convenient.

There are two issues: subject-verb agreement and incorrect adjective/adverb form. The relative clause 'which make' refers to the singular noun phrase 'which' (referring to the fact or the bicycle being cheap and easy to park) or more correctly to the singular idea and therefore requires third-person singular verb 'makes'. Also 'more convenience' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'convenient'. Suggestion: use 'which makes' for correct verb agreement and 'more convenient' or simply 'more convenient' to modify 'life'. Full corrected fragment: 'which makes daily life more convenient'.