Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and use correct tense and concise phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetitions and grammar mistakes (e.g., use past tense 'didn't have' and remove duplicate words).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or shared rides with neighbors. This made me used to walking long distances.

제안: Answer directly, use fewer fillers and improve coherence with linking words. Give one clear reason and a concrete example. Use plural/singular correctly (e.g., 'the majority of people travel by bike').

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, in rural areas where buses don't run, many people ride motorbikes to reach markets and schools.

× When I was a child, at that time I do not have that much facility to buy any any of the bikes.

✓ When I was a child, I did not have the means to buy any bikes.

The sentence describes a past situation, so the verb should be in the past tense ('did not have') rather than present tense 'do not have'. Remove redundant phrases ('at that time', 'any any of the') and use natural collocation 'the means to buy' or 'the money to buy'. Suggestion: use simple past for past descriptions and avoid repetition.

× That's why in childhood time I do not have any bike.

✓ That's why in my childhood I did not have a bike.

This sentence refers to a past time period, so the verb must be in the past tense ('did not have') rather than present ('do not have'). Also use the natural phrase 'in my childhood' instead of 'in childhood time' and use singular 'a bike' when referring to not owning one. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistency and use common time expressions.

× Definitely, uh bikes are very popular in my country as majority of people are travelling through through uh the bikes.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country because the majority of people travel by bike.

'Majority' with 'the' requires singular agreement for the group concept or use 'majority of people travel' with plural verb; here 'travel' (not 'are travelling') is more natural for a general statement. 'Travel by bike' is the correct prepositional phrase rather than 'travelling through the bikes'. Also remove repetition 'through through'. Suggestion: use simple present for general facts and correct preposition 'by'.

× Apart from that, there are several cases in which the public transportation are not possible.

✓ Apart from that, there are several situations in which public transportation is not available.

Use 'situations' instead of 'cases' for clarity; 'public transportation' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is' not 'are'. Also 'not possible' is unusual here—use 'not available' or 'not an option'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with uncountable nouns and choose appropriate collocations.

× In that case also uh majority of people are using the bikes.

✓ In those cases, the majority of people also use bikes.

For general habitual actions, use simple present 'use' rather than present continuous 'are using'. 'Majority' should be preceded by 'the' and agree with the verb form; 'in those cases' matches plural 'cases'. Also 'bikes' is fine without 'the'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and ensure correct article and verb agreement.