Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan ama dilbilgisi ve netlik sorunları var. "my father and my parents was" gibi hataları düzeltin; özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin. Cümleyi daha kısa ve net tutun: önce doğrudan cevap verin, sonra kısaca nedeni açıklayın. Bağlaçlar (because, so) doğru kullanılmalı; gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca yaş belirtirken bağlamı netleştirin (ör. "until I was 17"). Örnek olarak doğal akışta 2 cümle yeterli olur.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried I might have an accident, so they only bought me a bike when I was 17.

제안: Cevap iyi bir fikir veriyor ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi geliştirilmeli. "All people around" yerine daha uygun ifadeler kullanın (e.g. "many people"), ve cümleleri bağlamak için uygun bağlaçlarla daha akıcı olun. Şehir planlamasıyla ilgili cümleyi netleştirin: şehirlerin bisiklet dostu olmadığı ve bunun yaralanma riskini artırdığı vurgulansın. İki kısa cümleyle görüş + sebep verin.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular and many people enjoy cycling. However, cities are not very bike-friendly, which increases the risk of accidents and discourages some people from cycling.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because of my father and my parents was afraid of me having an accident so they bought me a bike when I was 17 years old.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were afraid I might have an accident, so they bought me a bike when I was 17 years old.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement and redundancy issues. 'My father and my parents was' repeats the subject and uses the singular verb 'was' with the plural subject 'parents'. Use only 'my parents' and the plural verb 'were'. Also, 'afraid of me having an accident' is awkward; use 'afraid I might have an accident' for natural phrasing. Ensure punctuation by separating clauses with a comma and a coordinating conjunction. Öneri: Cümlede tekil/çoğul uyumuna dikkat edin; çoğul özneyle (my parents) çoğul fiil (were) kullanın. Tekrardan kaçının (my father and my parents) ve daha doğal bir ifade için 'afraid I might have an accident' kullanın.

× Actually all people around like bicycles because they like driving bikes, but because of cities are not designed in line with this bicycles and risk of getting injured.

✓ Actually, many people like bicycles because they enjoy riding them, but cities are not designed for cycling and there is a risk of getting injured.

Problems: 'all people around' is unnatural; use 'many people'. 'Driving bikes' should be 'riding them' (bicycles are ridden). 'Because of cities are not designed in line with this bicycles' is ungrammatical and has article/number issues; correct to 'cities are not designed for cycling'. Also add 'there is' to express existence of risk. Remove the plural article mismatch 'this bicycles'. Öneri: 'all people around' yerine 'many people' kullanın, 'driving bikes' yerine 'riding them' tercih edin, 'cities are not designed for cycling' ile daha doğal ve doğru bir yapı kurun ve 'there is a risk' ekleyerek varlık ifade edin.