Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên và đủ thông tin, nhưng có thể cải thiện độ linh hoạt và sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tách rõ ý chính (mô tả xe), sau đó nêu thói quen hiện tại như một chi tiết bổ sung với liên từ thích hợp (ví dụ: "and", "so", "because"). Ngoài ra tránh câu quá dài; giữ tối đa 3–4 câu để tự nhiên hơn. Thực hành dùng một vài từ vựng mô tả (e.g., "well-preserved", "childhood bike") để làm câu phong phú hơn.

예시: I did — I had a blue bike when I was a child, and my mum gave it to me. It’s actually still in good condition, so I keep it and ride it most mornings to get some exercise and clear my mind before work.

제안: Câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có ví dụ cụ thể; bạn đã dùng so sánh nhóm (children vs elderly). Có thể thêm một liên từ chuyển tiếp để làm mạch lạc hơn và một chi tiết cụ thể nữa (ví dụ: tỷ lệ, địa điểm hoặc lý do môi trường) để tăng tính thuyết phục. Tránh lỗi nhỏ về mạo từ ("to the school" → "to school").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children and the elderly. For example, children often ride to school or around the neighbourhood for fun, while many older people use bikes to go to the market because they are inexpensive and convenient.

× I ride it every morning to get some exercise and to clear my mind before work.

✓ I ride it every morning to get some exercise and to clear my mind after work.

The original sentence uses 'before work' which contradicts 'every morning' because mornings typically occur before work, but if the speaker said they ride it every morning and then go to work, 'before work' could be acceptable. However, if the intended meaning is to relax after the workday, 'after work' is correct. Clarify the intended time. Suggestion: decide whether the activity happens before or after work and use the corresponding preposition 'before' or 'after' accordingly.

× Children often ride bikes to the school or just around the neighborhood for fun, while older people use them to go to the market because they are cheap and convenient.

✓ Children often ride bikes to school or just around the neighborhood for fun, while older people use them to go to the market because they are cheap and convenient.

The phrase 'to the school' is an incorrect use of the definite article with the preposition 'to' in this general context. In English, when talking about the activity of attending school in general, we say 'to school' without 'the'. Suggestion: remove the article when referring to general institutions (school, church, university) in this construction.