Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, natural and give a bit more detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”), then add one or two brief specific reasons or memories. Use linking words (e.g., “because” or “but”) to connect ideas. Keep to under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I sometimes borrowed my friend’s bike to ride around the neighborhood after school.

제안: The answer is generally natural and relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary, varied sentence structures, and a linking phrase to organize details. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific examples and a short reason. Avoid repetition (e.g., “at any other places”) and use plural agreement (“they” → “people”).

예시: Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students cycle to school and vendors use bicycles to carry goods to the market, which makes cycling a convenient and affordable option for short trips.

× I did not have it.

✓ I did not have one.

The pronoun 'it' refers to a specific item previously mentioned; when answering 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' using 'it' is unnatural. Use 'one' to refer to a nonspecific countable item (a bike). This fixes pronoun reference and sounds natural: 'I did not have one.'

× Yeah, I think it's popular because I see a lot of people using it, whether they're going to school at the market or at any other places.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular because I see a lot of people using them, whether they are going to school, to the market, or to other places.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural), so pronouns and verbs should agree in number. Change 'it's popular' (singular) to 'they're popular' (plural). Replace singular 'it' with plural 'them' to refer to bikes. Use consistent pronouns 'they are' instead of contraction mix. Also adjust prepositions: 'going to school, to the market, or to other places' is more natural than 'at the market' or 'at any other places.' This addresses subject-verb agreement and incorrect use of pronouns and prepositions.