Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and tense consistency, avoid redundancy, and keep answer within 3–4 sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (appearance, how you used it), and finish with a past-tense summary. Use linking words correctly (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'therefore') and correct verb forms.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was rose pink with a small floral basket, and I often rode it to the local park to play with friends. Because neighbors lived nearby, I usually used it almost every day during summer.

제안: Clarify ideas and correct vocabulary and sentence endings. Give one strong reason, then a linked second reason with specific detail or example. Avoid filler phrases like 'honestly speaking' and complete your final sentence. Use correct words (e.g., 'bike' not 'Pike'). Keep to 2–4 sentences and use linking words such as 'because', 'also', 'for example'.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people prefer cycling for exercise and to save money. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances instead of taking taxis, especially in cities with good bike lanes.

× So I really enjoyed using it to go to the parks.

✓ So I really enjoyed using it to go to the park.

The original sentence uses 'the parks' which implies multiple parks; context suggests a habitual activity (going to the park) and 'park' as a general place is more natural. The grammar issue flagged is 'Verb + -ing form' because 'using' is correct, but the noun phrase after it should be singular 'park' to match common collocation. Suggestion: use 'the park' for general activities or 'parks' only if you specifically visited multiple parks regularly.

× Hence I use it on a daily basis.

✓ Hence I used it on a daily basis.

The student is describing a past situation ('when I was a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. This is a present tense error: 'use' should be 'used' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: ensure verb tense matches the time reference in the sentence (past events require past tense verbs).

× this is because in this country people love to exercise and apart from that, they would love to save money.

✓ this is because in this country people love to exercise and, apart from that, they would like to save money.

The phrase 'apart from that' should be set off with commas. Also 'would love to' is acceptable but 'would like to' is more natural when describing a general preference; the problem flagged is preposition/punctuation around the phrase 'apart from that' and verb choice. Suggestion: use commas to separate the parenthetical phrase and prefer 'would like to' for general statements of preference.

× they would use Pike instead of buying cars or using public transportation to go to places.

✓ they would use a bike instead of buying cars or using public transportation to get around.

'Pike' is a misspelling of 'bike' (lexical error classified here as adjective/adverb/misc misuse). Also 'to go to places' is awkward; 'to get around' is the natural adverbial phrase. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'bike' and replace 'to go to places' with 'to get around' for natural expression.

× Therefore, I do think that the.

✓ Therefore, I do think that bikes are popular.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb phrase and object, making it a sentence structure error. The speaker likely intended to conclude that bikes are popular. Suggestion: complete the clause with the intended idea, ensuring subject and predicate are present (for example, 'bikes are popular').