Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short and direct, which is fine, but to score higher you should add one or two specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a reason or a brief example using a linking word (for example, because, so, however). Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a busy city and it wasn't safe to ride on the roads. Instead, I often walked to school or took the bus, which meant I didn't need one.

제안: This answer is unclear and repetitive. Focus on giving a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, for instance, however) and avoid repeating phrases. Try to mention who uses bikes, where they are popular, and why.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting in cities. For instance, in university towns and residential areas you can see many students and workers cycling, especially since bike-sharing schemes have become available.

× There are different kinds of company that there is a popular in our country.

✓ There are different kinds of company that are popular in our country.

The error is a singular/plural issue: 'kinds of company' implies multiple types, so the verb and noun following must be plural. The original mixes structures ('that there is a popular') which is ungrammatical. Corrected: use 'that are popular' to agree with the plural subject 'different kinds of company'. Suggestion: use 'different kinds of companies that are popular' or 'different kinds of company that are popular' and ensure subject and verb number match. Alternatively, more natural: 'There are different kinds of companies that are popular in our country.' This uses plural noun 'companies' with plural verb 'are.'

× Uh, there are different companies.

✓ There are several different companies.

This is a sentence structure and style issue: while the original is grammatically acceptable, it is brief and unclear in context. Adding a quantifier like 'several' clarifies meaning and sounds more natural in response to the question about popularity. Also remove filler 'Uh' in formal responses. Suggestion: 'There are several different companies' or 'There are various companies that are popular.'