Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, provide a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct articles and verb forms, and avoid repetition. For example, begin with a direct statement about not having a bike, then briefly explain why or what you did instead.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family couldn't afford one at the time. As a result, I didn't learn to ride until I was a teenager.

제안: Make the answer concise and avoid repeating words. Provide a topic sentence then one specific supporting detail with linking words and a brief example or comparison. Use correct noun forms and possessive expressions.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In particular, many young people prefer cycling for short trips because it is cheap and convenient, so you see lots of bicycles in cities and near schools.

× No, I didn't have bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The noun 'bike' is a singular countable noun and requires an article. Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'bike'. Also add the article 'a' before 'child' to form the correct phrase 'a child'. Suggestion: use 'a' or 'the' appropriately with singular countable nouns and include articles before nouns like 'a child' and 'a bike'.

× I didn't get it actually.

✓ I didn't get one, actually.

The original sentence 'I didn't get it actually' is unclear because 'it' lacks a clear antecedent; in this context the speaker means they did not receive or own a bike, so 'one' is the appropriate pronoun for 'a bike'. Also place 'actually' at the end for natural word order. Suggestion: use 'one' to refer to an unspecified singular item and place adverbs like 'actually' after the object.

× Oh yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Oh yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Bikes' is a plural noun and does not require an article when speaking generally. No change needed.

× I think nowadays everyone has bike and most of new generation likes to ride bikes nowadays.

✓ I think nowadays everyone has a bike and most of the new generation like to ride bikes.

Two issues: 1) 'everyone' is a singular indefinite pronoun and should be followed by 'a bike' (singular countable noun requires an article). 2) 'most of new generation' needs the definite article 'the' before 'new generation'. 3) Subject-verb agreement: 'most of the new generation' is treated as a plural group, so use 'like' rather than 'likes'. 4) Remove the redundant 'nowadays' (used twice). Suggestion: use 'a' after 'everyone', add 'the' before noun phrases like 'new generation', and ensure verb agrees in number with the subject.