Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and avoid filler words (e.g., "uh"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details to make the answer more natural and informative. Use linking words if you add details (e.g., "and", "so", "because").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old. My dad gave it to me for my birthday, and I used it every day to ride to the park and visit my friends. It helped me learn balance and independence.

제안: Give a topic sentence then support it with specific reasons or examples and use a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases like "I think" too often; be confident in your statement. Add a brief comparison or trend if possible.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in South Korea because cities have invested in bike lanes and rental systems, so many people use them for short trips. For example, in my hometown there are shared bikes near subway stations, and I often see commuters riding to work.

× I can see a lot of people taking bikes even in my hometown.

✓ I can see a lot of people riding bikes even in my hometown.

The verb 'take' plus object is not the usual collocation for using a bicycle in English. The correct verb is 'ride' or the gerund 'riding' after 'see' to describe people using bikes. Use 'riding' to show the ongoing action you observe. Suggestion: use 'riding bikes' or 'using bikes' depending on nuance.