Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and naturalness: use past simple correctly and provide a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents encouraged me, I became confident riding it by the time I was seven.

제안: Correct grammar and expand with a specific reason and a contrasting detail. Use linking words (for example, however) and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'in my country', 'sun exposure', 'urban areas'). Keep response concise and natural.

예시: Bicycles are not very popular in my country because many people worry about sun exposure and heat. For example, commuters often choose motorbikes or cars for comfort; however, cycling is more common in cooler regions or among fitness enthusiasts.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations (I didn't have...).

× Bikes are not that popular on our country because people don't want to get sunburn.

✓ Bikes are not that popular in our country because people don't want to get sunburned.

Use preposition 'in' with countries ('in our country'), not 'on'. Also 'sunburn' as a noun refers to the condition; the verb form is 'get sunburned' or 'get sunburn'. In American and British English, 'get sunburned' or 'get a sunburn' are natural. Suggestion: say 'in our country' and 'get sunburned' (or 'get a sunburn').