Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と聞き返しの使い方を改善してください。受け答えで質問をそのまま復唱してしまうと会話が前に進みません。過去の事実を述べるときは、主語＋動詞を明確にして短く答え、その後必要なら一文で補足を加えてください。例：子供の頃の所有に関する簡潔な肯定／否定→期間や頻度など具体的な補足。

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I mostly walked to school, but sometimes I borrowed a neighbour's bike on weekends.

제안: 流暢さはある程度ありますが、冗長な接続詞と曖昧な表現を減らし、理由をより具体的に述べてください。まず簡潔な結論を言い、その後に“because”や“for example”などの接続で具体例（通勤・環境・経済面など）を示すと良いです。また発音を明瞭にして詰め詞（uh, and）を減らしましょう。

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to school and work. For example, in big cities there are dedicated bike lanes and affordable shared-bike schemes that make cycling convenient.

× Did you have a bug when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'bug' instead of 'bike', which is a wrong word choice leading to nonsensical meaning in context. Use the correct noun 'bike' to match the examiner's question. Improve by listening carefully and verifying nouns before answering; practice minimal pairs and common vocabulary for transport. Grammar problem type ID:26

× And ye yes, and many people uh commute to school and workplace by bike.

✓ Yes, many people commute to school and work by bike.

The original sentence contains fillers ('And ye yes', 'uh') and an awkward phrase 'workplace'. Also 'commute to work' is the idiomatic expression. Remove unnecessary fillers and use correct collocation 'commute to school and work'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It is because riding bike is healthy.

✓ It is because riding a bike is healthy.

The noun 'bike' requires an article in this general statement; use 'a bike'. Alternatively, use the gerund phrase 'riding a bike'. The error is an article/word choice omission. Improve by remembering singular countable nouns need 'a' or 'the' unless plural or uncountable. Grammar problem type ID:22