Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a higher score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details using linking words, keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use correct grammar. For example, say whether you had a bike, describe it briefly, and mention a memory or reason why you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven years old. It had a basket on the front, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride quickly and felt very independent.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar mistakes, redundancy and lacks coherence. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, in addition, because) to add two specific reasons or examples. Correct grammar (e.g., “I have” not “I has”, “riding a bike” not “driving bike”), and keep the response within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. In addition, many people prefer cycling for exercise and to avoid traffic. For example, my brother bikes to work every day, and I enjoy going on weekend rides with him.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, even my brother has a bike and I also has curiosity and interest in driving bike and going on trips on my bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. My brother has a bike, and I am also curious and interested in riding a bike and going on trips with my bike.

Errors involve singular/plural noun use and verb forms. 'I also has' is incorrect because 'has' is third person singular; use 'am' with 'curious' (adjective) or 'have' for 'interest'. 'Driving bike' is unnatural; collocate 'ride a bike'. Include articles: 'a bike'. Use 'going on trips with my bike' for correct preposition use. Suggestion: use 'I am curious' or 'I also have curiosity' or better 'I am also curious and interested in riding a bike and going on trips with my bike.'