Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically correct, answer directly with a clear tense and topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). For example, correct verb tense and word choice: say "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child." Then add why it mattered or a brief memory: use linking words like "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I became confident riding on my own by age seven.

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear opinion, use correct grammar, and provide specific supporting details and linking words to explain why. Avoid vague time phrases and unrelated comments. A good structure: topic sentence (opinion), reason(s) with linking words, and a brief example or result.

예시: Yes, I think bikes became more popular during the pandemic because people avoided public transport and wanted outdoor exercise. For instance, many cities saw higher sales of bicycles and more people cycling in parks, which made streets quieter and air quality better.

× Yes, I do have a back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Errors: 'do have' is present tense and incorrect for a past context; 'back' is a typo for 'bike'. Use past simple 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Replace 'do have' with 'had' and correct 'back' to 'bike' to form a grammatically correct past-tense sentence. Grammar problem type IDs: 5 and 26.

× Back when in the pandemic days, yes, it is very quiet.

✓ Back in the pandemic days, yes, it was very quiet.

Errors: word order 'Back when in the pandemic days' is awkward; 'it is' uses present tense but refers to past period. Use 'Back in the pandemic days' for natural phrasing and past simple 'was' to match the time reference. Suggestion: Use 'Back in the pandemic days' and 'was' to indicate past situation. Grammar problem type IDs: 6 and 26.