Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently and correct articles), make the response more natural and concise, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then one supporting reason or feeling. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences. For example, use 'I didn't have a bike' and 'couldn't afford one' and add a short consequence or feeling.

예시: I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I really wanted a bike and often watched other children riding around our neighborhood. As a result, I learned to enjoy walking and playing other outdoor games instead.

제안: Clarify your opinion with a clearer topic sentence and provide specific supporting details and linking words. Correct grammar and sentence structure (e.g., 'people use them for short trips or exercise'). Give examples or reasons (cost, convenience, health). Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes and exercise because they're cheap and convenient. For instance, students often cycle to school, and in some cities cycling is encouraged to reduce traffic and pollution.

× I don't have any bike during my childhood days because my family cannot afford a bike at that time, but I really wanted to have one.

✓ I didn't have a bike during my childhood because my family couldn't afford one at that time, but I really wanted one.

Errors: incorrect tense and auxiliary (used present 'don't have' instead of past 'didn't have'), article use ('any bike' should be 'a bike' or 'any bikes' but singular count noun needs 'a'), unnecessary phrase 'days' after childhood, and modal/past ability 'cannot afford' should be past 'couldn't afford'. Suggestions: use past tense for past situations (didn't, couldn't), use 'a' before a singular countable noun, and simplify phrases (use 'during my childhood' without 'days').

× I think bikes are popular in our country because I see some people using it and does not use commuting, instead they use they are using bike for.

✓ I think bicycles are popular in our country because I see some people using them for commuting instead of using cars or public transport.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and pronoun agreement ('bikes' plural requires 'them' not 'it'), incorrect verb forms and auxiliary usage ('does not use commuting' is ungrammatical), redundant and incorrect phrasing ('they use they are using bike for'). Suggestions: use consistent plural references ('bikes' -> 'them'), use correct verb patterns ('using them for commuting'), and clarify the contrast with correct comparative phrase ('instead of using cars or public transport').