Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, give one brief supporting detail and avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") correctly and keep answers under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I often rode a small tricycle that had three wheels, which I used to play in the neighborhood. As I grew older, I learned to ride a proper bicycle at age ten.

제안: Work on sentence fluency and remove repetitions. Give a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "so"). Use more precise vocabulary like "inexpensive", "short trips", or "commutes".

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to travel to local markets or to commute short distances to work, especially in crowded city areas.

× Uh, when I were a child, I don't have a bike because, uh, I were not able to drive a bike.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I was not able to ride a bike.

Errors: 'were' used with singular subject I (subject-verb agreement) and tense inconsistency: question asks about past, so use past tense throughout. 'Don't have' is present; change to 'didn't have'. Also 'drive a bike' is unnatural; use 'ride a bike'. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs consistently for past-time statements: 'I was', 'I didn't have', 'I was not able to ride'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I have bicycle, uh, four or four bicycle or 4 uh, which have 4 tires.

✓ I had a bicycle, uh, one bicycle with two tires.

Errors: article missing before 'bicycle' and number confusion; also tense should be past to match 'when I was a child'. A bicycle normally has two tires, not four. Use 'a bicycle' for singular countable noun. Suggestion: Use correct article 'a' before singular countable nouns and ensure factual accuracy and clear number expression: 'I had one bicycle with two tires.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because usually because they are very cheap and usually people use for mini travel.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and people usually use them for short trips.

Errors: redundancy 'usually because' and word choice/structure: 'use for mini travel' is incorrect. Use 'use them for short trips'. Also maintain present simple for general fact: 'are', 'think', 'use'. Suggestion: Remove redundant words, place adverb 'usually' before verb or after subject, and include object pronoun 'them' after 'use'. Grammar problem type ID:6