Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và dùng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'parents' thay vì 'parent', 'bought' cần phù hợp với thời gian). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ai mua, loại xe, kỷ niệm ngắn) và dùng liên từ phù hợp như 'and', 'but', 'so'. Luyện phát âm từ như 'balance' và tránh tiếng ngập ngừng như 'umm'.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a brand-new bicycle when I was about eight, and they taught me how to ride it in our backyard. At first I struggled to keep my balance, but after a few weeks of practice I became much more confident.

제안: Cần dùng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh từ không đúng nghĩa ('window well trend' không phù hợp). Tránh tiếng ngập ngừng và sắp xếp ý: nêu quan điểm trước, rồi đưa lý do cụ thể (bảo vệ môi trường, sức khỏe, tiết kiệm tiền). Dùng từ vựng chính xác như 'popular', 'trend', 'environment', 'health' và liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'and' để nối ý.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people choose them to protect the environment and to stay healthy. In addition, cycling is often cheaper and more convenient than driving in busy cities, so more people are adopting it.

× When I was a child both my parent bought me a entire new bike and also told me how to ride this.

✓ When I was a child both my parents bought me an entirely new bike and also taught me how to ride it.

'Parent' should be plural 'parents' because 'both' refers to two people; 'a entire' is wrong: use the article 'an' before a vowel sound and 'entire' should be used as adjective but 'entirely new' (adverb + adjective) is more natural; 'told me how to ride this' is awkward: use 'taught me how to ride it' to indicate instruction and use pronoun 'it' for the bike. Suggestions: change singular nouns to plural when referring to two people, choose correct article 'a' or 'an' based on initial sound, and use 'teach' for instruction rather than 'tell'.

× When I was a child both my parent bought me a entire new bike and also told me how to ride this.

✓ When I was a child both my parents bought me an entirely new bike and also taught me how to ride it.

'Bought' and 'told' are simple past verbs and are fine, but 'told me how to ride this' is incorrect collocation for learning; 'taught' is the correct verb meaning to give instruction. Use past simple consistently for past events. Suggestions: use correct lexical verb 'teach' in past tense 'taught' when describing instruction.

× At first I felt it quite difficult to do balance to get the balance.

✓ At first I found it quite difficult to keep my balance.

The sentence uses awkward phrasing 'to do balance to get the balance' and incorrect verb choice. Use the pronoun 'it' as a dummy object 'found it difficult' and the noun phrase 'my balance'. 'Keep my balance' is the natural collocation. Suggestions: use 'find it + adjective' structure for reactions and common collocations like 'keep balance' or 'keep my balance'.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ (No correction needed)

This sentence is already correct: 'bikes' plural matches general question about popularity. No grammatical change required.

× Uh, yes, I do think that umm, buying bike is uh, window well trend in my country umm for because people want to protect the environment and also improve their physical health too.

✓ Uh, yes, I do think that buying bikes is a popular trend in my country because people want to protect the environment and also improve their physical health.

Several issues: 'buying bike' should be plural or gerund phrase 'buying bikes' to speak generally; 'is a popular trend' is the correct collocation instead of 'window well trend'; remove redundant words like 'for' and 'too'; maintain subject-verb agreement: 'buying bikes is' (gerund phrase singular). Use concise phrasing. Suggestions: use gerund phrases correctly, ensure subject-verb agreement with gerund as singular, choose correct collocations like 'popular trend', and avoid filler words.