Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, use correct tense and clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and filler words. For example, change mixed tenses to past tense, replace unclear words ("file", "Fernandez") with accurate nouns, and remove hesitations.

예시: Yes. I had a very good bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it to the park with my friends, and we would race each other on quiet paths. It was reliable and helped me stay active.

제안: Answer directly, correct vocabulary and word forms, and link reasons with clear connectors. Use precise phrases ("I think", "popular among young people"). Give one specific example or consequence and keep to 2–3 sentences. Avoid filler sounds.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular, especially among young people. They use bikes to commute to university or meet friends, which is convenient and also benefits physical fitness and mental well-being.

× Yeah, when I was a child, I have a really, I had a really good bicycle.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I had a really good bicycle.

The student mixed present tense 'have' with past context 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent with time markers (use past tense for past events).

× I usually, uh, use it to such kind of this bicycle when I, I went to the go to the file with my Fernandez or my acquaintance, uh, it's what, which bike was one of the.

✓ I usually used it to ride to the field with my friend or acquaintance; that bike was one of my favorites.

Multiple problems: tense inconsistency ('use' vs past context), incorrect word choices ('such kind of this', 'the go to the file', 'Fernandez'), repetition and unclear structure. This fits sentence structure errors (26) and present/past tense mismatch (6). Per instructions only one type per correction is required, so labeled as sentence structure errors. Suggestions: simplify the sentence, use correct vocabulary ('field', 'friend'), keep consistent past tense 'used', and remove filler words. Use clear subject-verb-object order.

× In my perspective, yes definitely barks are very preferable among young people.

✓ In my perspective, yes, definitely bikes are very popular among young people.

The student wrote 'barks' likely a misspelling of 'bikes' and 'preferable' is awkward here. This is primarily a word choice/noun error mapped to singular/plural category (1) per the list. Suggestion: use correct noun 'bikes' and a natural adjective 'popular' instead of 'preferable'.

× Today we usually use uh bicycles for going out with my friends or just running around and which is a very helpful for our well-being and also mental health.

✓ Today we usually use bicycles to go out with friends or just run around, which is very helpful for our physical well-being and mental health.

The sentence misuses gerunds/prepositions ('for going out' is acceptable but 'use bicycles to go out' is clearer), contains unnecessary pronoun 'my' before friends in general statement, and incorrect article 'a very helpful'. Labeled as verb in the present participle form (10) because of gerund/infinitive choice issues. Suggestions: choose infinitive 'to go' or gerund consistently, remove incorrect articles, specify 'physical' if intended, and streamline sentence structure.