Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự câu để trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ hợp lý. Hãy dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ lý do được tặng, cảm xúc, cách dùng chiếc xe). Chú ý thì của động từ và loại bỏ từ không cần thiết (ví dụ “it this is”).

예시: Yes. My dad bought me a bicycle as a birthday present when I was ill. I loved it because it helped me get outside and play with my friends, so I often rode it around the neighborhood.

제안: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Bắt đầu với một câu trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/Partly), sau đó giải thích bằng lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Tránh tiếng lắp và sửa lỗi từ (conveniences → convenient; subways → the subway).

예시: Partly. Most people prefer traveling by bus or the subway because public transport is convenient in cities. However, some people choose to cycle to work for short distances to save money and reduce pollution.

× My dad bought me a bike when I was sick and it this is my gift for my birthday.

✓ My dad bought me a bike when I was sick; it was a gift for my birthday.

Sentence has redundant words and incorrect tense/structure. 'it this is' is wrong. Use past tense 'was' to match 'bought' and remove redundant 'this'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and simple structure.'

× I love my bike very much so I use the bike to go out with my friends.

✓ I love my bike very much, so I use it to go out with my friends.

Pronoun and word choice issue: 'the bike' is awkward after expressing ownership; use pronoun 'it'. Comma before 'so' improves sentence flow. Tense (present) is fine. Suggestion: replace definite noun with appropriate pronoun and insert a comma.'

× People in my country prefer travelling by bus or by subways because this is a conveniences uh.

✓ People in my country prefer traveling by bus or subway because it is more convenient.

Grammar errors: 'by subways' is incorrect plural with 'by' and 'a conveniences' mixes article and plural noun. Also 'this is' is vague; use 'it is more convenient.' Use 'subway' (uncountable/general) or 'the subway' depending on context. Suggestion: use correct noun form and comparatives for convenience.'

× However somewhat like riding bike to go to the work to protect the environment.

✓ However, some people like riding bikes to go to work to protect the environment.

Fragment and missing subject: 'However somewhat like...' lacks a clear subject and has incorrect word forms: 'somewhat' -> 'some people', 'riding bike' -> 'riding bikes' or 'riding a bike', 'to the work' -> 'to work'. Make it a full clause with subject and correct nouns. Suggestion: add subject, pluralize nouns appropriately, and remove unnecessary articles.'