Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, who gave it to you, how you used it). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid one-word replies. Keep it concise (up to 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I got a blue bicycle for my ninth birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because it was light and easy to handle, I quickly learned to ride without training wheels, which made me feel very independent.

제안: Provide a clearer opinion with specific reasons and a brief explanation of the term you used. Start with a direct statement, then give one or two concrete reasons or examples, and use linking words (for example, because, therefore). Avoid unclear phrasing like 'do bike.'

예시: Yes, I believe bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines because many people use them for exercise and commuting, especially in cities with heavy traffic. For example, groups of cyclists known as 'Ciclistas' often organize weekend rides, and more people have started cycling because it is affordable and good for health.

× I think yes because many Filipinos do bike.

✓ I think so because many Filipinos ride bikes.

The original uses the auxiliary 'do' with the verb 'bike' in a way that is unnatural for this context. English normally uses the verb 'ride' for bicycles and does not use 'do' as a main verb here. Also 'yes' is better replaced with 'so' after 'I think'. Change corrects verb choice and idiomatic usage: 'ride bikes'. Suggestion: Use the verb 'ride' for bicycles and avoid 'do' as a main verb in affirmative statements about habitual actions; say 'many Filipinos ride bikes.'

× They are called Cecilista.

✓ They are called 'Ciclistas' or 'Cecilistas' in some regions.

The original sentence may be using a misspelled or incorrect term. If referring to cyclists in Filipino/Spanish-influenced usage, the word is typically 'ciclistas'. Also, when presenting a local name, it is clearer to indicate variant spellings or regional uses. Suggestion: Verify the correct local term and its spelling; present it clearly as a name: 'They are called ciclistas.' If 'Cecilista' is intended, explain it as a regional nickname.