Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and naturalness, keep answer concise and add a short supporting detail using a linking word. Correct past tense and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it every day with my brother at the park. We usually raced along the paths, which helped me gain confidence and keep fit.

제안: Make the response direct, fix grammar and repetition, use a linking word to explain reasons, and give a specific example or comparison to support your view.

예시: Not really. Because the public transport infrastructure is poor, most people prefer cars, so there are many vehicles on the road. For example, in my city the lack of bike lanes makes cycling unsafe and uncommon.

× Yes, I always ride a bike every day with my brother at the park.

✓ Yes, I always rode a bike every day with my brother at the park.

The question asks about having a bike when you were a child, so the past tense should be used. 'Ride' is present tense; change to 'rode' to match past context. Also 'always' and 'every day' are redundant together but acceptable; consider using one for conciseness (e.g., 'always rode' or 'rode every day').

× Not actually, because the transportation system is not that good. So there is many there are many cars in on the road, making it quite difficult to ride a bicycle.

✓ Not really, because the transportation system is not that good, so there are many cars on the road, making it quite difficult to ride a bicycle.

Several issues: 'Not actually' is unnatural in this context; 'Not really' is more appropriate. The sentence duplicates phrases ('there is many there are many') and has wrong agreement: 'there are many cars' requires plural verb 'are' with plural noun 'cars'. Remove the extra 'there is' and use 'on the road' (preposition) rather than 'in on the road'. Combine clauses with a comma or conjunction instead of starting a short sentence with 'So' for smoother structure.