Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ตอบได้ชัดเจนแต่มีความผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำเลือกใช้บางคำไม่เหมาะสม ทำให้ความหมายไม่ชัดเจน ควรปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้ Linking words เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลและเวลา และแก้คำศัพท์ผิด เช่น "shoes" ควรเป็น "chose" รวมทั้งลดความซ้ำและแบ่งเป็นประโยคสั้นๆ สูงสุดไม่เกิน 3-4 ประโยค

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child and I enjoyed riding it a lot. However, after a while I stopped riding because I discovered swimming and preferred it as a hobby. Now I only ride a bike occasionally.

제안: คำตอบมีไอเดียแต่การใช้ภาษาไม่ชัดเจนและซ้ำซ้อน ควรใช้ประโยคเริ่มต้นตอบตรงคำถาม ตามด้วยเหตุผลสั้นๆ และตัวอย่าง สนับสนุนด้วย Linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") และใช้คำศัพท์ที่ตรงประเด็น เช่น "popular", "common", "preferred" แทนวลีซ้ำซ้อน

예시: I don't think cycling is very popular in my country because many people prefer team sports or gym activities. For example, football and fitness classes attract more participants, so cycling is usually a secondary option for most people.

× Yes, when I was a little child I owned a bike and I used to like to bike a lot, but one day I just stopped biking and shoes to swimming instead of biking.

✓ Yes, when I was a little child I owned a bike and I used to like biking a lot, but one day I just stopped biking and chose to swim instead of biking.

The sentence had incorrect verb forms: 'like to bike' is acceptable but 'like biking' is more natural for habitual enjoyment (Verb + -ing). 'shoes to swimming' is a typo and incorrect form: it should be the past tense verb 'chose' followed by the base verb 'swim' (not 'swimming') after 'choose to'. Suggestion: use consistent gerund for activities you enjoy (liking biking) and use the past tense 'chose' with the infinitive 'to swim' for a completed decision.

× Personally, I don't think biking is very popular in my country because it is a lot of sport that we can choose from our preferences.

✓ Personally, I don't think biking is very popular in my country because there are a lot of sports that we can choose according to our preferences.

This sentence used 'it is a lot of sport' which is ungrammatical. Use 'there are' for plural countable nouns (there be issue combined with plural) and 'sports' plural. Also 'choose from our preferences' is awkward; use 'choose according to our preferences'. Suggestion: use 'there are' + plural noun and a clearer preposition phrase 'according to' for preferences.

× So biking is not always the first choice that people like to choose when it comes to choosing a sport and they actually enjoy.

✓ So biking is not always the first choice people make when it comes to choosing a sport that they actually enjoy.

The original repeats 'choose' multiple times and has awkward structure 'people like to choose when it comes to choosing'. Simplify by using 'the first choice people make' and add 'that' to modify 'a sport' properly. Suggestion: avoid redundancy by using a single clear verb ('make') and a relative clause to specify 'that they actually enjoy'.