Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be sure to answer in the correct tense and give a bit more detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two short supporting details (where you got it, how often you rode it, or why you didn’t have one). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). Use linking words like “because” or “so” if you explain reasons.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I mostly walked to school with my friends. Occasionally I borrowed a cousin's bike during holidays.

제안: Use correct grammar and be more specific. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words such as “because”, “however”, or “for example.” Avoid vague phrases like “enough popular.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters and students riding bikes, and there are many bike-sharing schemes available.

× I don't have one.

✓ I didn't have one.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'I don't have one' is present tense and does not match the time frame. Use 'didn't have' for past negative: 'I didn't have one.' Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time expression; for past contexts use past simple ('did' + base verb) for negatives.

× I think bike is enough popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

Multiple issues: 'bike' lacks the correct article or plural form; here a general statement about a category uses the plural 'bikes'. The phrase 'enough popular' is incorrect word order and collocation in English; 'enough' usually follows adjectives ('popular enough'), but the intended meaning is better expressed with 'quite' or 'very'. Also 'in my country' is correct. Suggestion: Use plural for general statements ('bikes') and choose correct adverb placement and collocation ('quite popular' or 'popular enough' depending on nuance).