Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan soruyu tekrar etmek yerine net bir konu cümlesiyle başlamalı ve ardından kısa destekleyici detaylar eklemelisiniz. Cümleniz doğal değil ve hiçbir bilgi vermiyor. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarlar ve yapı eksikliği var. 1) Soruyu tekrar etmeyin; doğrudan yanıt verin (evet/ hayır). 2) Kısa bir açıklama veya örnek verin (kaç yaşında, ne tür bir bisiklet). 3) Bağlaçlarla mantıklı bir bağlantı kurun. Örnek olarak 2–3 kısa cümle yeterli olur.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight and used it to ride to my friend’s house. Because there were few parks nearby, I often rode around the neighborhood with my brother.

제안: Cevap doğrudan ve fikir belirtiyor, ancak cümle yapısı karışık ve tekrarlamalar var. Ayrıca mantıksal bağlantılar zayıf; sebep açıklaması belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. 1) Net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın. 2) Sebepleri mantıklı sıra ile, bağlaçlar (because, so, therefore, however) kullanarak belirtin. 3) Öznel bir örnek veya istatistik ekleyin. 4) Cümleleri daha kısa ve doğru gramerle kurun.

예시: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer using private cars or public buses because the infrastructure for cycling is poor and distances between places are often long. For example, in my city there are very few bike lanes, so most people find driving more convenient.

× No, actually I don't think bikes are popular in my country because most of people using their own cars or some people are using buses for transportation because our country's economy is not good and some of people.

✓ No, actually I don't think bikes are popular in my country because most people use their own cars, some people take buses for transportation, and our country's economy is not good.

The sentence has multiple issues: 1) 'most of people' and 'some of people' are incorrect; use 'most people' and 'some people' (preposition 'of' is unnecessary with these quantifiers). 2) Verb forms are inconsistent: 'most people use' (simple present) and 'some people take' (simple present) match habitual actions. 3) Repetition and run-on structure: combine ideas with commas and 'and' for clarity. 4) 'are using' is unnecessary continuous; use simple present for general facts. Suggestion: remove 'of' after quantifiers, use simple present verbs for habits, and restructure sentence to avoid repetition.