Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lỗi lặp từ khiến không tự nhiên. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, sửa lỗi ("present for my present" sai) và thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (mô tả loại xe, ai tặng, hoặc kỷ niệm ngắn) dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle as a child. My parents gave it to me for my tenth birthday, and it was a red mountain bike with a bell. I loved riding it around my neighborhood every afternoon, which helped me make friends and gain confidence.

제안: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có dấu hiệu do dự và lặp từ ("modern technology and modern society", "motorbikes and, uh, the cars"). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng, dùng liên từ để giải thích lý do và thêm 1 ví dụ cụ thể (số liệu, hoàn cảnh). Giữ câu ngắn và tự nhiên.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular right now. Due to rapid urbanization, most people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience, especially during long commutes. For example, in my city many families own at least one motorbike, so cycling is mostly seen as a leisure activity rather than daily transport.

× It was a present for my present on my birthday.

✓ It was a present from my parents on my birthday.

The student used 'present for my present' which is incorrect word choice and likely a typo. The intended phrase is 'present from my parents'. Use 'from' to indicate the giver and 'parents' (plural) for mother and father. Suggestion: say 'It was a present from my parents on my birthday.'

× Uh, at the moment I don't think so, because nowadays with modern technology and modern society, people use motorbikes and, uh, the cars more often.

✓ Uh, at the moment I don't think so, because nowadays with modern technology and modern society, people use motorbikes and cars more often.

The phrase 'the cars' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the' before a general plural noun. When speaking about things in general, do not use 'the'. Also remove filler 'the' before 'cars'. Suggestion: say 'motorbikes and cars more often.'