Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct tense and a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise. For example, start with Past Simple: “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Then give a short detail about when or how you used it, using a linking word if adding a second idea (e.g., “and” or “because”).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school almost every day until I was twelve.

제안: Make the subject-verb agreement correct and provide a clear reason with specific detail. Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then add a specific example or reason linked with a connector like “because” or “for example.” Avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many families encourage children to cycle for short trips. For example, I often see groups of children riding to the park and to nearby shops in my neighborhood.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense auxiliary 'do have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense for habits or possessions in the past (I had a bike).

× Yes, bike is popular in my country because a lot of child biking around my neighbor area.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because a lot of children ride bikes around my neighborhood.

Multiple plural errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' and 'child' should be plural 'children'. Also 'a lot of' requires a plural noun 'children'. 'Biking around' is awkward; use 'ride bikes' for children performing the action. 'Neighbor area' is incorrect collocation; use 'neighborhood'. Suggestion: ensure nouns agree in number and choose correct collocations (ride bikes, neighborhood).