Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and has multiple pronunciation/word-choice errors (buy vs bike, write vs ride) and incomplete ideas. To improve: 1) Use a clear topic sentence directly answering the question (e.g., “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”). 2) Provide one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who gave it to you, or how long you had it) and connect them with linking words (for example, “and,” “because,” or “but”). 3) Keep the answer concise (max 3–4 short sentences) and avoid hesitations. 4) Check word choice and pronunciation: practice “bike” and “ride,” and use simple past tense correctly (I had / I rode).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to the park every weekend. However, I stopped using it when I started taking the bus to school.

제안: The answer is short, unclear, and contains pronunciation/word-choice errors (Korea port? ride the dead?). To improve: 1) Start with a direct opinion: “Yes, bikes are popular in my country” or “No, they aren’t.” 2) Add 1–2 specific reasons or examples (e.g., many people cycle for short trips, bike lanes in cities, students using bikes). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.” 3) Avoid confusing expressions; replace unclear phrases with simple vocabulary. 4) Keep it brief and structured (2–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in South Korea. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips and there are growing bike lanes in cities, so cycling is becoming more common.