Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문장 이해에 어려움이 있습니다. 우선 질문을 정확히 반복하지 말고 질문에 직접 답하세요. 과거 시제(예: "I had" 또는 "I didn’t have")를 사용하고, 간단한 주제 문장 다음에 한두 개의 구체적 세부사항(예: 몇 살 때, 어떻게 사용했는지)을 덧붙이세요. 연결어(예: "when", "so", "because")를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and used it every day to ride to my friend’s house. Because it was small and sturdy, I learned to ride quickly.

제안: 질문을 그대로 되묻지 말고 의견을 바로 표현하세요. 주어와 동사의 일치를 확인하고, 현재 시제(예: "are" with plural "bikes")를 사용하세요. 주제 문장으로 간단히 의견을 말한 뒤, 한두 개의 구체적인 이유나 예시로 뒷받침하세요. 연결어(예: "because", "for example", "however")로 논리를 명확히 하세요.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see lots of bike lanes and rental services, which makes cycling convenient.

× Did you have a bike when you're well child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'you're' (you are) incorrectly and mixed present tense with past context. The question asks about a past time, so use past tense 'were' for the second person singular in the past. Also 'well' is unnecessary and incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'when you were a child.' Suggestion: Use 'were' for past states and remove extraneous words. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Do you think a bike are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used the singular article 'a' with the plural verb 'are', causing subject-verb mismatch and article misuse. The question asks about bikes in general, so use the plural noun 'bikes' with 'are.' Alternatively, for singular: 'Do you think a bike is popular in your country?' Suggestion: Match singular/plural consistently and use correct verb form for number. Grammar problem type ID: 1