Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse contient des erreurs de vocabulaire et de grammaire et n'est pas pertinente par rapport à la question. D'abord, utilisez le mot correct (« bike ») et évitez de confondre les objets. Ensuite, corrigez le temps verbal: pour parler du passé, utilisez le prétérit (« I had ») ou « when I was a child ». Enfin, développez brièvement avec un détail spécifique (par exemple, qui vous a offert le vélo, ou pourquoi vous l'aimiez) et utilisez au maximum 3-4 phrases cohérentes.

예시: I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. I loved it because it gave me freedom and helped me make friends in the neighborhood.

제안: Votre réponse ne répond pas à la question et contient une confusion lexicale (« pigs » au lieu de « bikes »). Répondez directement au sujet demandé, puis justifiez votre opinion avec des raisons spécifiques et un exemple. Utilisez des connecteurs simples (for example, because, so) pour organiser votre réponse et restez concis (2-4 phrases).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, for example students and delivery workers.

× I had a pig when I am a child.

✓ I had a pig when I was a child.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present tense 'am'. The time reference 'when I was a child' requires past tense for the verb 'to be'. Use 'was' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: keep all verbs referring to past events in past tense (e.g., 'I had', 'I was'). Grammar problem type ID: 6

× No, I don't think pigs are popular in my country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The student answered a question about bikes but replied about pigs, causing a content mismatch. Grammatically, 'pigs are popular' is fine (plural agreement), but it does not answer the examiner's question. Replace 'pigs' with 'bikes' to address the topic. Also ensure tense and number remain appropriate ('bikes are popular'). Grammar problem type ID: 1